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CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM - UNEMOTIONAL RESPONSE
Marian Baltazar
Class of 1980, University of the Philippines College of Manila
AB Political Science
Constructive criticism is an unemotional response to people’s actions and can prove to be very helpful and
beneficial to an individual. If we do not let our emotions rule the way we criticize or judge a person, then we
actually adapt constructive criticism. Although constructive criticism can be very helpful to a person, not all
people are receptive to it. They sometimes feel that self-esteem goes down the drain and that their egos are
being touched or harmed by it. This shouldn’t be the case when we deal with such an unfavorable judgment.
Oftentimes, constructive criticism refers to the critique of someone else’s written or artistic work, but in fact it
means a critical reasoned analysis of a person’s behavior. In reality, it has a goal of improving some area of
another person’s life or work. Most of the time people find criticism to be negative and this destroys the true
intent of constructive criticism. As a matter of fact, constructive criticism should address the area in which a
person needs improvement. It should be a reasoned, unemotional response in an effort to teach. Take for
instance a child, who just lost a game, it would definitely be better if we could give him some encouraging
words rather than making a critique out of his performance.
We can always criticize some person’s work but we have got to be doubly sure that the said individual would
not be offended with such action of ours. While we try to notice whatever mistakes that lie behind one’s work,
it should pave the way to drive that person to do better next time and not really be discouraged at all. That
would only hold true if we criticize constructively and not let our emotions meddle in the way we give our
observations and comments on a particular work or some area in an individual’s personal life. As much as
possible we should avoid direct criticism but try to be objective in the utmost manner. That is trying not to
pinpoint defects or mistakes in an outright manner dealing with the individual personally.
In a teacher/student relationship, it would be of great help if the teacher will have a constructive criticism
rather than criticizing the student bluntly of his defects. The teacher can either praise him in some areas or
maybe write a question on the child’s work so as not to be greatly affected and disappointed. What some
teachers do is they provide guidelines beforehand to their students in writing an essay or a paper in order to
eliminate further problems that may likely occur. I therefore conclude that constructive criticism actually
means showing grace and giving the other party all the considerations for that person to continue doing his
work in an efficient way and be at his best when the right time comes. As for me, we should always make it a
point to be kind and helpful and extend whatever generosity we could give to make that person bring out the
best in him and make this world a better place to live in. In general, constructive criticism wouldn’t hurt us but
give us a finer way of helping a person improve in some areas of one’s life or line of work, so why don’t we give
it a try?
Questions for discussion:
1. What is constructive criticism?
2. Do you agree that constructive criticism is an unemotional response? Explain your answer.
3. Will the self-esteem or ego of a person be greatly affected when you adapt constructive criticism? Why or
why not?
4. Have you practiced constructive criticism? How?
5. How do you criticize a person’s work? Explain your answer.